Boats Chimes

Excuse me if I offend you people?

so you want a catchy packet of rhymes
using words like cut and slice
depression entices you’re lousy minds
never to contemplate upon a piece
but only to scim over and quickly say
“I really liked this”
can you answer mine
Fine answers people
if every response made a sound
you’d all perfectly harmonize
with that comment chiming in the background too
but at higher note
I’d like to stuff a boat up all your asses

Well hello then! I think this will work. Your poem by its self is unassuming and does not grab me . The message and the passion in it though is awesome. That made me say …ok I know that feeling of frustration where you finally get pissed enough to spew. That’s what poetry should do…cause some sort of reaction in the reader,

Bruce Springsteen – Chimes Of Freedom